Post by 128Up! on Jun 25, 2010 18:17:17 GMT -5
This is my first attempt at a piece of creative writing. Please keep this in mind when criticising it.
This piece, "Living the Dream" is based an a situation myself, Diamond, Titus and Moonlight have concocted. Please note this situation is COMPLETELY FICTIONAL.
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Chapter One - Familiar Faces
I sauntered into the countryside. I was in a country I've never been to before...and meeting friends I've never seen. Being a solitary city boy, this was the most unknown territory imaginable. I wandered in the empty, vast expansive area before me. A feeling of love swept straight past me, for although I was lost, I had purpose for being here. The three most important people in my life lay hidden in this wasteland.
"Two words spring to mind..." I said to myself, "...Needle, and Haystack. I'll never find them!" I looked around. And I saw absolutely nothing I could relate to whatsoever compared to my home back in England. Four thousand miles from family...just four or so from my friends. One of them, I held close to my heart, for she was my girlfriend. As pathetic as I know I sound, I wanted her and her friends (Titus and Jessica) more than anything else in the world. I daydreamed of her to pass the time...
And at that exact point, a girl walked past me. She was talking to a friend on her mobile phone. It made me think I was abandoned forever, until I heard her laugh. That unmistakeable laugh. It was her!
"Dia! Dia!" I shouted. "Over here!" She looked around, with a bewildered look. She couldn't believe her eyes. And neither could I. I had been here for hours upon end, searching for any of my three treasured ones. She took me miles away from my arrival point...though, that being said, it felt much more akin to a distance of light-years. Texas is the same landscape over and over again, not to say it's not magnificent though.
After an excruciatingly long period of time, I arrived at a speck of civilisation in the centre of a white and yellow scorching void. Dia walked up to the door of the ramshackle building to reveal a decorative, modern house to suit our gaming obsessions. It was perfect except for...
"Titus! Jessica! You have a visitor!" Dia shouted.
"Who is it?" Jessica yelled in return.
"Oh, just my boyfriend...remember the name Philip?"
They rushed out to me at the door...with unexplainable shock in their eyes.
Four best friends, two loving couples. Could this get any better? I think not.
This piece, "Living the Dream" is based an a situation myself, Diamond, Titus and Moonlight have concocted. Please note this situation is COMPLETELY FICTIONAL.
__________________________
Chapter One - Familiar Faces
I sauntered into the countryside. I was in a country I've never been to before...and meeting friends I've never seen. Being a solitary city boy, this was the most unknown territory imaginable. I wandered in the empty, vast expansive area before me. A feeling of love swept straight past me, for although I was lost, I had purpose for being here. The three most important people in my life lay hidden in this wasteland.
"Two words spring to mind..." I said to myself, "...Needle, and Haystack. I'll never find them!" I looked around. And I saw absolutely nothing I could relate to whatsoever compared to my home back in England. Four thousand miles from family...just four or so from my friends. One of them, I held close to my heart, for she was my girlfriend. As pathetic as I know I sound, I wanted her and her friends (Titus and Jessica) more than anything else in the world. I daydreamed of her to pass the time...
And at that exact point, a girl walked past me. She was talking to a friend on her mobile phone. It made me think I was abandoned forever, until I heard her laugh. That unmistakeable laugh. It was her!
"Dia! Dia!" I shouted. "Over here!" She looked around, with a bewildered look. She couldn't believe her eyes. And neither could I. I had been here for hours upon end, searching for any of my three treasured ones. She took me miles away from my arrival point...though, that being said, it felt much more akin to a distance of light-years. Texas is the same landscape over and over again, not to say it's not magnificent though.
After an excruciatingly long period of time, I arrived at a speck of civilisation in the centre of a white and yellow scorching void. Dia walked up to the door of the ramshackle building to reveal a decorative, modern house to suit our gaming obsessions. It was perfect except for...
"Titus! Jessica! You have a visitor!" Dia shouted.
"Who is it?" Jessica yelled in return.
"Oh, just my boyfriend...remember the name Philip?"
They rushed out to me at the door...with unexplainable shock in their eyes.
Four best friends, two loving couples. Could this get any better? I think not.