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Post by Deleted on Dec 12, 2011 22:13:35 GMT -5
Finally, someone who likes Stephen! And why is it sad? He's the most fun to write in my personal thoughts. You'll get a lot more of his insight soon since the book switches between his and Rini's POVs.
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Post by Moonlight on Dec 12, 2011 22:17:51 GMT -5
No, that the attraction to Rini is a "cover up". That's what's sad.
But Stephan has potential to grow into a very epic character, and we're only four chapters in.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 12, 2011 22:20:37 GMT -5
Oh, okay, lol. Yeah, it is sad. Silly yaoi fangirls.
Thank you. Do you think he has the potential to grow in a very epic bad guy, since that's what he's gonna be...
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Post by Moonlight on Dec 12, 2011 22:32:25 GMT -5
Well, as long as you stop relying on highschool stereotypes, I don't see why not.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 12, 2011 22:33:18 GMT -5
Haha.. Are Rini and the others kinda stereotypes?
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Post by Moonlight on Dec 12, 2011 22:36:02 GMT -5
Well, they rely on it to some degree. If you have to use stereotypes, use them as a stepping stone. Instead of thinking of them as belonging to a clique first, think of them as a real person.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 12, 2011 22:36:50 GMT -5
Oh, okay. That makes sense. Does it seem rushed at all? I kinda thought it did.
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Post by Moonlight on Dec 12, 2011 22:37:35 GMT -5
XD, you did touch on what I was thinking. The chapters could potentially be longer, that or you could've had more. But there is a lot that you could've done already.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 12, 2011 22:39:15 GMT -5
Oh, okay. I could always go back and add more details to everything and try to build in the characters personalities.
Any guess what Rini is? (Vamp, witch etc....)
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Post by Moonlight on Dec 12, 2011 22:41:21 GMT -5
It's pretty obvious from the get-go that she's a witch of some variety.
But I'll touch on the flash-back and such in my actual review. (I haven't actually written down the review yet, but it's running through my head in bits and pieces.)
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