128Up!
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These mushrooms are MINE!....Right?
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Post by 128Up! on Nov 23, 2010 13:29:48 GMT -5
Perfect indeed. I have no reedeming qualities, nothing to my own, nothing to master, nothing to appreciate, no-one brave enough to breach the fiery wall across my blemished, distorted person...
I am no-one, I have nothing, even if you say I exist, I do not.
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Post by Diamond on Nov 23, 2010 15:39:53 GMT -5
Up, I do not even know what to say. Your poem is truly horrifying to me, I did not even think someone like you, who I once thought sweet and gentle, could even dream up such horrific things.
And your above post is no better. Up, pause for a minute and think about what you're saying. If we are truly your friends, you would not be throwing our comfort back in our faces. We care about you, I care about you. But you are truly wearing thin my last shred of patience for this crap.
You do need thicker skin and to butt out of things that aren't any of your business. It is not you place to be mad at her mother, that is Moon's place. You may be mad about what she did, but she truly only wishes for Moon to be the best person she could be. Maybe her method is rather annoying, but you should not say such horrifying things.
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Post by 128Up! on Nov 23, 2010 15:52:47 GMT -5
Up, I do not even know what to say. Your poem is truly horrifying to me, I did not even think someone like you, who I once thought sweet and gentle, could even dream up such horrific things. And your above post is no better. Up, pause for a minute and think about what you're saying. If we are truly your friends, you would not be throwing our comfort back in our faces. We care about you, I care about you. But you are truly wearing thin my last shred of patience for this crap. You do need thicker skin and to butt out of things that aren't any of your business. It is not you place to be mad at her mother, that is Moon's place. You may be mad about what she did, but she truly only wishes for Moon to be the best person she could be. Maybe her method is rather annoying, but you should not say such horrifying things. *reads author of this post* Oh god what have I become? T_T I know sincerity doesn't quite work in internet posts, but I honestly regret ever writing that...I... ...I have no explanation. I must be monstrous to you all without even stopping to realise how much crap you all wade through to be helpful and respectful to me... ...And I've never repaid you properly... ...This...this is ridiculous. I don't want to be who I am...
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Post by Moonlight on Nov 23, 2010 16:23:10 GMT -5
Poem now removed, post simply edited. Let us hope that we need no more moderation such as that.
Also ... I second Dia-chan. You are my friend. We forgive and forget, but sometimes, there are lines that simply should not be crossed.
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Post by 128Up! on Dec 3, 2010 13:36:51 GMT -5
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Post by Sabaku No Akaiame on Dec 3, 2010 14:05:23 GMT -5
Kthx, Up ;D We all have our styles, just cause mine's harder on the words and longer on the narration, doesn't mean that mine's better than yours. Yours are short and "sweet (!!??)" and that's what makes them enjoyable to read ^^
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Post by 128Up! on Dec 9, 2010 12:59:21 GMT -5
How Friendship Paints a Picture
See if the title makes sense after reading it~
Many people watch over this land Only to see just some houses stand One of which constructed from sand Never has a strange world been seen Lighting bright, and fields pristine I find this place beautiful yet unseen Golden flowers push through the ground Howling creatures, the only sound This is perfection, I have found
Zero others around this place One stands alone, a smile on her face Running through the complex maze A joyous girl through city haze You see this person, and get so close Days passing without her calls being morose A spoon of her childhood, a daily dose
Disaster never stikes this town I never see that small girl frown Active animals surround stones of grey Movements swifter, day to day Orange, yellow, red... the sky Newer additions taken by the eye Decades could pass, I shan't wave goodbye
Simplicity is our mind's dream Arranged carefully, without a seam Beauty, ingenuity, emotion, shade A wondrous game my minds have played Kids that we are, we wish for its truth Under our dreams lies reality, uncouth
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Post by 128Up! on Dec 30, 2010 11:06:50 GMT -5
Now for a request from Queen Zorayda. :3
Summoning Snowfall
Pure white clouds hang above our heads As people's footprints form snowy treads It's been wondered how you make snow A force of nature or something we can't show?
Let me tell you that I've seen the creature Whose only purpose is making the weather feature A small group of people, microscopic almost With power so mysterious, they can't help but boast.
Every snowflake is different, they are that precise And within their hearts, nothing's not nice "Snow Angels" by nature, fairies by name Once you read the story, snow will never be the same.
Every time their wings flap strong A strand of ice is made, thin and long The blizzard winds blow an shape that's complex As the icy string does twist and flex.
This happens so fast, no-one's seen it before But now I showed you in verses of four Now stand outside and listen close to the air And see if you hear wings flapping up there~
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Post by Zorayda on Dec 30, 2010 11:11:35 GMT -5
Awww, this is perfect! I love this so much <3 It makes me wanna go play in snow and listen for fairy wings :3
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Post by 128Up! on Dec 30, 2010 11:13:13 GMT -5
Awww, this is perfect! I love this so much <3 It makes me wanna go play in snow and listen for fairy wings :3 <3 :3 I blame you for making use the heart and catface so much. :3 ...Dammit. >_<
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