128Up!
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These mushrooms are MINE!....Right?
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Post by 128Up! on Jun 2, 2010 19:33:36 GMT -5
Hello. This is Up, and welcome to Poetry Castle! ;D
In here, I inscribe my works into the very walls of this monument so they stand for the rest of time.
Beyond the Sky - 3rd June 2010
Above and beyond
The world that we see
Hides incredible places
Where we all wish to be.
Countless stars float
Planets abound
Where no-one hears suffering
As nothing makes a sound.
Freedom at its greatest
Break away from the trap
That is our planet Earth
And soar straight off the map.
Regulation can be tiresome
For we live with our hearts
And if we can't show emotions...
Our minds become two parts.
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Post by Moonlight on Jun 2, 2010 19:48:37 GMT -5
*_*
This opening poem is completely epic, Up! You continue to convince me more and more of your talent, my friend. I cannot wait to see more.
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128Up!
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Post by 128Up! on Jun 2, 2010 19:59:40 GMT -5
Thank you Moonlight.
I seem to be good at touching the hearts of my readers.
Whether it holds true universally is beyond my knowledge...
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128Up!
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Post by 128Up! on Jun 3, 2010 9:35:10 GMT -5
Monochrome Haikus - 3rd June 2010
Look around, people
Black, white, black, white...repeating
No variety.
Clouds cover the sky
The sun wishes to come out
And brighten our lives.
But this is a world
Where hatred conjures a storm
Arch-enemies swarm.
If we all showed love
Towards the girls and the boys
No more stormy skies.
I try to show this
Compassion in my black heart
No-one knows its truth.
The clouds of friendship
Rain down on me every day
No relationships.
Are friends so tricky...
...to attain for your own soul?
Solitude beats me.
Loneliness dispels.
That's what I want to happen...
People...speak to me...
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Post by Moonlight on Jun 3, 2010 9:36:18 GMT -5
Aww ... You have friends here, Up. You can count on that. *huggles.*
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128Up!
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Post by 128Up! on Jun 3, 2010 11:25:38 GMT -5
I realise that Moonlight...but I needed to get that off my chest.
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Post by Diamond on Jun 4, 2010 0:06:21 GMT -5
Aww. You've made me feel sad! Good job! I love your stuff already. And yeah, as Moon said, you have friends here.
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128Up!
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Post by 128Up! on Jun 4, 2010 2:09:29 GMT -5
Aww. You've made me feel sad! Good job! I love your stuff already. And yeah, as Moon said, you have friends here. Thanks Diamond. This made me laugh in your comment... "You've made me feel sad! Good job!"  |
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Admiral Titus
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Post by Admiral Titus on Jun 4, 2010 7:37:21 GMT -5
128_Up...
I offered to be your friend...
Stop ignoring me!
/lol
But great poetry. And the haiku above is for you.
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128Up!
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Post by 128Up! on Jun 4, 2010 7:48:21 GMT -5
128_Up... I offered to be your friend... Stop ignoring me! /lol But great poetry. And the haiku above is for you. XD It was a generalisation, Titus. I have but a few, so I'm incomplete. And how are you pronouncing my username? It's four syllables or eight. |
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