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Whispers in the Water

A gentle swim to calm the nerves
A relaxing lake to your own
Peace surrounds the paradise
So quiet when you're alone

Sleeping beneath the clear blue depths
Lies a voice I recognise
I cannot believe my sound in my ears
Or the sights within my eyes

Can it be? Are you under there?
Are you waiting for me to sink?
Are you wondering why I am so shocked?
Asking why my skin's turned pink?

If I could, I'd sink below
To see what you've become
But I daren't witness the voice
Who sometimes made me numb

I shake my head, I listen again
Now the sound vanishes away
I return here every summertime
So with you I spend another day...

I wished you never ran away
I wished with me you remained
For every day that I forget you
It never shines, it always rained

In the lake I roam around
Searching for your face
I just hope I'm not dreaming
And I'm in my perfect place.

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A Hole in the Heart

A dreadful day looms nearer
As the brightened sun does set
I tremble very quickly
As loneliness hasn't left yet

My heart does bleed of sadness
My mind casing a sad past
For when this day arises
Darkness inside me is cast

Any times of joy and love
Are few and far between
This day I dread with all my soul?
Second month, day fourteen...

[Zorayda]

This is when you find a lonely gal on V day and hug her, because she feels just like you do T.T

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Nightfall Away From Madness

Stars scatter the night with a cosmic shade
Moonlight leaks through the shadows made
The constellations above joyfully played
As the Sun's orders to leave were surely obeyed

Earth spins so everyone sees the delight
From staring at stellar beauty ever so slight
The rays from space which are ever so bright
None of which is spoiled by the great urban plight

Planets far and wide become visible but small
As they lurk at the end of the intergalactic hall
In a spatial fantasy where everything floats but no fall
Where sound's nonexistant, silence is the only call

Alone in the wonderland watching the sky
With blossoms as my mattress, on the fields I lie
I absorb the stunning scenes before daybreak draws nigh
But I wish you'd be with me, experiencing perfection... you and I.

[Moonlight]

Yay! You posted it here!

As I said on skype, this is by far my favorite poem of your works thus far. It's beautiful, has a simplistic stanza set, and paints the scene very nicely. ^^

10 stars.

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As the Wind Speaks...

Mysterious air drifting in all directions
Without a worry of holding perfections
Nature's voice is carrying the warmth and the cold
With swift, smooth movements, the ground does mould

Solar flares heat the wind, snowflakes cool it down
As it whispers in the night, no-one dares to frown
In daylight hours people gather in the countryside
For breezes, gales and hurricanes, each bring others pride

Direct your ears towards the sky when you have any time to spare
And take note as you hear Nature's voice trembling through the air
Emotions drafted high above, upon the Arctic drifts
When the world shakes, it's the soundwaves of Earth that mean everything shifts

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Seduction's Cruel Curse

My eyes, they glance across the stream
My hands, they twitch beyond control
My mind, creating such a perfect dream
My heart, showing that pressure's taking its toll

Her hair, it glistens in the sunlight's rays
Her dress, it sparkles in the stars in the sky
Her face, so beautiful I cannot help but gaze
Her skin, so smooth without blemish yet you don't even try

But as attached as I seem, a secret lays in my head
One I refused to utter before now, but I'm alone
Just between you and myself, I'm not careful where I tread
For this must be the twentieth girl to whom I'd want love shown

My attention is caught by any woman I spot
With whom I hoped to share my fragile heart
As long as I think they are like me somewhat
I'd risk my sanity and intellect to have her to start

But in less than a day, every attempt did fail
No matter if I changed myself to a fresh new mould
Every one I lost meant my sadness grew in scale
I swear my emotion is worse than any that's been told

I know it's not age, I've done from fifteen to twenty-six
I know it's not looks, since they look different from each other
I want a shoulder to cry on, but I don't know how their clock ticks
I need a woman to take as mine, since I daren't screw up another...